tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post1903610298377623428..comments2023-09-30T04:36:14.906-07:00Comments on एक अधूरी कविता: कभी कभी गुज़रा वक्त गुज़रता नहीSajal Ehsaashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-19450645646909106422010-02-11T03:50:11.787-08:002010-02-11T03:50:11.787-08:00Beautiful :)Beautiful :)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07866471574504663496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-67535811039484390492009-09-16T06:47:09.096-07:002009-09-16T06:47:09.096-07:00WOWWW !!! :)WOWWW !!! :)vivek's.......https://www.blogger.com/profile/04465286136455529907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-34627983695260685932009-09-01T09:13:52.836-07:002009-09-01T09:13:52.836-07:00thank you everyone...thank you everyone...Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-40627582901644442132009-08-31T23:13:48.381-07:002009-08-31T23:13:48.381-07:00Jaane kya soch kar nahi guzra ! kabhi kabhi hum sh...Jaane kya soch kar nahi guzra ! kabhi kabhi hum shayad chahte hi nahi ki kuch pal guzre..hum usi mein kahin na kahin jame rehna chahte hain...Reetikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14264105272527267576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-84147130669068648692009-07-27T00:50:25.772-07:002009-07-27T00:50:25.772-07:00Umda likha hai !! kabhi kabhi kuch pal ke katre ja...Umda likha hai !! kabhi kabhi kuch pal ke katre jam jaate hain, shayad hum khud hi nahi chahte ki woh pal kabhi guzre..Reetikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14264105272527267576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-91639457888981646572009-07-14T22:56:08.304-07:002009-07-14T22:56:08.304-07:00WOWWW !!WOWWW !!vivek's.......https://www.blogger.com/profile/04465286136455529907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-42975062622220495482009-07-10T09:43:51.661-07:002009-07-10T09:43:51.661-07:00a loveable poem...........a loveable poem...........वर्तिकाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13444219725390127945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-4737747007287152952009-07-07T09:20:01.278-07:002009-07-07T09:20:01.278-07:00Shukriya aap sab kaa...Nirmala Ji aapka ashirvaad ...Shukriya aap sab kaa...Nirmala Ji aapka ashirvaad paake main dhany huaaSajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-57314076199754803402009-07-07T04:45:50.032-07:002009-07-07T04:45:50.032-07:00अपनी खूश्बू दे जाता है,
अपने पीछे तन्हाई को,
गुमसु...अपनी खूश्बू दे जाता है,<br />अपने पीछे तन्हाई को,<br />गुमसुम सा ताक रहा था,<br />बीते दिन की परछाई को... <br />सजल तुम्हारे नाम की तरह सुन्दर भावमय अभिव्यक्ति है आशीर्वाद्निर्मला कपिलाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11155122415530356473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-50649886414094333262009-07-07T01:51:22.670-07:002009-07-07T01:51:22.670-07:00सुन्दर.सुन्दर.hem pandeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08880733877178535586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-21054506507719915812009-07-06T22:52:25.679-07:002009-07-06T22:52:25.679-07:00अपनी तड़प,मजबूरी सारी,
बता गया उस सौदाई को,
बहुत ...अपनी तड़प,मजबूरी सारी,<br />बता गया उस सौदाई को,<br /><br />बहुत ही बेहतरीन रचना बधाई ।सदाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10937633163616873911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-62609025719803279452009-07-06T20:13:54.385-07:002009-07-06T20:13:54.385-07:00बहुत ही बढ़िया रचना....धन्यवाद..बहुत ही बढ़िया रचना....धन्यवाद..प्रसन्नवदन चतुर्वेदी 'अनघ' https://www.blogger.com/profile/03784076664306549913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-16493632754094552132009-07-06T06:29:00.442-07:002009-07-06T06:29:00.442-07:00किसी बात को कहने का ढंग कोई आपसे सीखे।
-Zakir Ali ...किसी बात को कहने का ढंग कोई आपसे सीखे।<br /><a href="http://alizakir.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">-Zakir Ali ‘Rajnish’</a> <br /><a href="http://tasliim.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">{ Secretary-TSALIIM </a><a href="http://sciblogindia.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">& SBAI }</a>adminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054511264112719402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-40381695748399519362009-07-05T05:31:54.668-07:002009-07-05T05:31:54.668-07:00अपनी खूश्बू दे जाता है,
अपने पीछे तन्हाई को,
गुमसु...अपनी खूश्बू दे जाता है,<br />अपने पीछे तन्हाई को,<br />गुमसुम सा ताक रहा था,<br />बीते दिन की परछाई को... <br /><br />सुन्दर लिखा है sajal जी............ अच्छा लगा पढ़ करदिगम्बर नासवाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11793607017463281505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-30182495982584618782009-07-05T05:17:44.780-07:002009-07-05T05:17:44.780-07:00बहुत ही बढ़िया रचना है
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तख़लीक़-ए-नज़रबहुत ही बढ़िया रचना है<br /><br />---<br /><a href="http://vinayprajapati.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">तख़लीक़-ए-नज़र</a>Vinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08734830206267994994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-23652100202602687022009-07-05T04:46:23.717-07:002009-07-05T04:46:23.717-07:00Thanks friends...Thanks friends...Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-66864902822447020312009-07-05T02:51:45.196-07:002009-07-05T02:51:45.196-07:00bahut badhiya...kaphi achchha laga aakar...aapko b...bahut badhiya...kaphi achchha laga aakar...aapko bhi thanks for visit on my blog....mark raihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11466538793942348029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-51785355020287113342009-07-04T17:05:29.071-07:002009-07-04T17:05:29.071-07:00बिते दिन की परछाई --
बहुत खूब अच्छी रचनाबिते दिन की परछाई --<br />बहुत खूब अच्छी रचनाM VERMAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-43723529218837452222009-07-04T12:14:30.252-07:002009-07-04T12:14:30.252-07:00अपनी खूश्बू दे जाता है,
अपने पीछे तन्हाई को,
गुमसु...अपनी खूश्बू दे जाता है,<br />अपने पीछे तन्हाई को,<br />गुमसुम सा ताक रहा था,<br />बीते दिन की परछाई को... <br />वाह बहुत सुंदर <br />धन्यवादराज भाटिय़ाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10550068457332160511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-8094279794599380942009-07-04T10:57:51.966-07:002009-07-04T10:57:51.966-07:00लेखनी में धार है -लिखते रहिये.लेखनी में धार है -लिखते रहिये.डॉ. मनोज मिश्रhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07989374080125146202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-7518995884378781812009-07-04T09:58:35.728-07:002009-07-04T09:58:35.728-07:00गुमसुम सा ताक रहा था,
बीते दिन की परछाई को,
अपनी त...गुमसुम सा ताक रहा था,<br />बीते दिन की परछाई को,<br />अपनी तड़प,मजबूरी सारी,<br />बता गया उस सौदाई को,<br />एक मोड़ पे तू पीछे छूटा, अगली गली पे वो आई थी,<br />तू तो बीत गया लेकिन,<br />तेरी याद दिल मे समाई थी, गुज़रा वक्त गुज़रता नही,<br />अपनी खूश्बू दे जाता है,<br />अपने पीछे तन्हाई को,<br />गुमसुम सा ताक रहा था,<br />बीते दिन की परछाई को... <br /><br /><br />बहुत सुंदर रचना...दर्द से भरीअर्चना तिवारीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04130609634674211033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-62934235899847668932009-07-04T08:11:02.324-07:002009-07-04T08:11:02.324-07:00shukriya...mere blog par aapka svaagat hai
@ all...shukriya...mere blog par aapka svaagat hai<br /><br /><br />@ all,<br />kuchh kaarano se lines thik se arranged nahi hai post me...iske liye maafi chahoonga...Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-80201952101674614362009-07-04T08:03:31.104-07:002009-07-04T08:03:31.104-07:00बहुत सुंदर..बहुत सुंदर..हर्ष प्रसादhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17273502114915516392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-82625239968817916962009-07-04T08:01:23.932-07:002009-07-04T08:01:23.932-07:00बहुत सुंदर सजल.बहुत सुंदर सजल.हर्ष प्रसादhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17273502114915516392noreply@blogger.com