tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post5297954228905867549..comments2023-09-30T04:36:14.906-07:00Comments on एक अधूरी कविता: थोड़ा सा व्यंगात्मक हो जाये...Sajal Ehsaashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-60098012942020227382009-03-26T13:26:00.000-07:002009-03-26T13:26:00.000-07:00lolzwatever u think.... i already said wat i wante...lolz<BR/>watever u think.... i already said wat i wanted 2... nice 2 c ur honesty :DUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07866471574504663496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-70693980859833857952009-03-23T09:53:00.000-07:002009-03-23T09:53:00.000-07:00that was pretty much flattering honestly....thanks...that was pretty much flattering honestly....thanks a lot for such kind words :)Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-43252231867966712722009-03-21T02:21:00.000-07:002009-03-21T02:21:00.000-07:00Isn't this post pretty much genius? I think it's a...Isn't this post pretty much genius? I think it's a super example of what good comedy should be about. Don't ask me to go into specifics as to why that is. Sadly, I'm no expert. Also, it's nearly 2.50 pm and my brain is a bit fried anyway. Otherwise I might spew some crap and we could pretend there was a bit of credibility to my thoughts on the matter.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07866471574504663496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-62316571255976833152009-01-31T07:36:00.000-08:002009-01-31T07:36:00.000-08:00पहली कोशिश तो अच्छी है, पर पहला पढने का मौका जरा ग...पहली कोशिश तो अच्छी है, पर पहला पढने का मौका जरा गडबडा गया...अगली कविता लिखिए तो नेताओं को मत बुलाइएगा...हम जैसे अच्छे श्रोताओं को न्योता दीजियेगा :) आगे के लिए शुभकामनाएंPuja Upadhyayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15506987275954323855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-45177057266109994622008-12-30T22:12:00.000-08:002008-12-30T22:12:00.000-08:00Thanks Dost :)Thanks Dost :)Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-82400216457367465882008-12-29T02:47:00.000-08:002008-12-29T02:47:00.000-08:00I feel this is quite matured poem.....and ur first...I feel this is quite matured poem.....and ur first attempt at "हस्य-व्यंग"..gr8......ur a gem...<BR/>I've never written any diary....... I think I should start writing now....after u reminded me thru this post :)<BR/>thnxAshish Gouravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13367298859443158406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-83374960867217347502008-12-27T12:54:00.000-08:002008-12-27T12:54:00.000-08:00@ Divya Di and Varsha ji...thanks for complimentVi...@ Divya Di and Varsha ji...thanks for compliment<BR/><BR/>Vineet...dekhte hai link :)Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-15172822831989709552008-12-27T10:40:00.000-08:002008-12-27T10:40:00.000-08:00bitspratik.blogspot.commight like thisbitspratik.blogspot.com<BR/>might like thisVineet Pandeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10361261594208609052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-79202937821821315562008-12-26T23:13:00.000-08:002008-12-26T23:13:00.000-08:00अच्छी कविता कहीअच्छी कविता कहीवर्षाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01287301277886608962noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-80421931421893919132008-12-26T10:01:00.000-08:002008-12-26T10:01:00.000-08:00gazab ho gaya..kya likha hai aapne waah ji waah..[...gazab ho gaya..kya likha hai aapne waah ji waah..<BR/>[:P]...aapke blog me hum har baar aate hai..mere blog me aap bhi dikh jate hai..he he..likhte raho..divyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01139393389330148947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-77298085167510220402008-12-26T10:00:00.000-08:002008-12-26T10:00:00.000-08:00@ Vinay..maharaj, netaji ne to baakiyo ko farar ka...@ Vinay..<BR/>maharaj, netaji ne to baakiyo ko farar kar diya unko kya zaroorat faraar hone ki..hausla badhaane ka shukriya<BR/><BR/>@ Shashwant...<BR/>Sir Ji mera bas chale to netaao ko sarkar banaane bhi na bulaaye...<BR/><BR/>@ Seema Mam...aapse is ek line ki tareef sunke lagta hai main itna galat nai soch raha tha jab mujhe laga "apni ek hi line ka ye kamaal hoga" ...badi achhi baat kahee aapne :)<BR/><BR/>PD Bhaiya..bas ab dil lagta jaa raha hai..likhte rahenge<BR/><BR/>@ Prakash Ji..janaab aapne badi door ki baat kar di..abhi to lekhan ka mazaa lootna hai<BR/><BR/>@ Rashmi mam..koshish safal huyee humari jo aap logo ko pasand aayee :)Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-91208801071887565782008-12-26T09:51:00.000-08:002008-12-26T09:51:00.000-08:00घुघूती बासूती..aap mere blog pe shayad pehli baar ...घुघूती बासूती..<BR/>aap mere blog pe shayad pehli baar aaye hai to aapka laag se swaagat karna chahoonga..ab to soch liya hai ki lage rahenge...itna pyar mil raha hai logo ka :)Sajal Ehsaashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03532103149883910427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-51483222876003025142008-12-26T09:33:00.000-08:002008-12-26T09:33:00.000-08:00तो जवाब था-हम नेता है जनता को परेशान कर होती है अप...तो जवाब था-हम नेता है <BR/>जनता को परेशान कर <BR/>होती है अपनी कमाई...<BR/>wah.....mazaa aa gaya padhkarरश्मि प्रभा...https://www.blogger.com/profile/14755956306255938813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-27540635913897292212008-12-26T09:23:00.000-08:002008-12-26T09:23:00.000-08:00अक्सर कोशिशें ही तो हैं जो कामयाब होती हैंकोशिश जा...अक्सर कोशिशें ही तो हैं जो कामयाब होती हैं<BR/><BR/>कोशिश जारी रहे मेरा विश्वास आप बड़े लेखक बनेंगे।Prakash Badalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04530642353450506019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-22189829248909926482008-12-26T07:35:00.000-08:002008-12-26T07:35:00.000-08:00bahut bahdiya likhe ho..kuchh aur try karo, achchh...bahut bahdiya likhe ho..<BR/>kuchh aur try karo, achchha hi likhoge.. :)PDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17633631138207427889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-60464081305945943442008-12-26T07:27:00.000-08:002008-12-26T07:27:00.000-08:00'good composition, vyng vyng mey ek baat to sach h...'good composition, vyng vyng mey ek baat to sach he likhe na ki 'jindge ek kavita hai' yhe sach hai jise hr koe apne apne trike se gata or likhta hai or jindge rupe kavita yunhe behte rhte hai dukh sukh ke jhonko se rubru hoker. Aapka pryas accha hai, keep it up. Good luck. Regardsseema guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02590396195009950310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-55000084475336478152008-12-26T07:22:00.000-08:002008-12-26T07:22:00.000-08:00अगली बार से नेताओं को मत बुलाइएगा! बढ़िया प्रयास| ...अगली बार से नेताओं को मत बुलाइएगा! बढ़िया प्रयास| ऐसे ही धकाड़ के लिखते रहिये|sshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10746526495871896780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-12281055956008316812008-12-26T02:59:00.000-08:002008-12-26T02:59:00.000-08:00बढ़िया है । लिखते रहिए। 'करत करत अभ्यास के जड़मति हो...बढ़िया है । लिखते रहिए। 'करत करत अभ्यास के जड़मति होत सुजान' या ऐसा ही कुछ कहा जाता है। जब हम जड़मति लगे हुए हैं तो आप जड़मति न होते हुए क्यों न लगे रहें?<BR/>घुघूती बासूतीghughutibasutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06098260346298529829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5696400299606393751.post-52925067006536914582008-12-26T01:57:00.000-08:002008-12-26T01:57:00.000-08:00बहुत बढ़िया, भई, नेता जी फ़रार हो चुके थे---चाँद, ब...बहुत बढ़िया, भई, नेता जी फ़रार हो चुके थे<BR/><BR/>---<BR/>चाँद, बादल, और शाम<BR/>http://prajapativinay.blogspot.com/<BR/><BR/>गुलाबी कोंपलें<BR/>http://www.vinayprajapati.co.ccVinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08734830206267994994noreply@blogger.com