Sunday, September 30, 2007

मज़हब नही सिखाता आपस में बैर रखना

It was the all important final match of 20-20 world cup........the clash of rivals(on the field,off the field i always feel we are brothers)....anything woth importance from Indian cricket team was being celebrated,crackers burst and one could sense an early Diwali being celebrated.......but amidst all this i could notice something peculiar,something similar was also happening in any Pakistani success as well,and yes,there was no mistake........a community was indeed praying for Pakistan's victory...actaully,in the vicinity of our colony,is a locality with majority belonging to this so called 'minority section' of our country......and they wanted their country to lose and their religion to win........or was this the case...can the success of any religion lie in the failure of the nation...though such people are in immense minority,it indeed is alarming
but the point is whom to blame...there has to be some reason behind such a mindset.people really are still discriminated on the basis of religion etc....and all the crappy politics which takes advantage of such feelings and exploit it are to be blamed....and all those 'mature' people of the country are to be blamed who ever saw someone with a point-of- view which had anything related to issues like religion
this experience of mine has prompted me to present my feelings in the form of this poem...please do give ur valuable comments on it

ये मन्दिर,मस्जिद,गुरुद्वारे,
देखो बाँट रहे इन्साँ को सारे,
उसने तो दी थी एक धरती
हमने खड़ी कर दी दीवारे

प्यार का गीत ना गाया लेकिन
धर्म का नारा खूब दिया,
चैन की वो तस्वीर बदल
ये खौफ़नाक नज़ारा खूब दिया,
प्यार के फ़ूल मिले थे और हमने
बना दी नफ़रत की तलवारें

अल्लाह से गुरू जुदा है क्यों,
भगवान से अलग खुदा है क्यों,
गर अलग नही ये एक दूजे से
सिर्फ़ एक को हमने चुना है क्यों
इन्साँ को खुशी क्यों देते है
ये झूठे बेमतलब के बँटवारें

देखो हवा में चीखें ये समायी है,
आज इन्साँ के पहचान की बारी आई है
,जहाँ में ऐसा कोई नही है
जो सिख,हिन्दू या मुसलमान नही,
फ़िर हर कदम पे ऐसे लोग है क्यों
जो सच्चे इन्सान नही.......

11 comments:

Udan Tashtari said...

बढ़िया है..काश, सब इस बात को समझ पायें. प्रयास जारी रखें, कलम की आवाज बहुत दूर दूर तक जाती है, शुभकामनायें.

vegeta said...

ultimate para....excellent expressions........seriously written from d heart.....u rock yaar and keep posting

aditi said...

excellent work bro.......(surprised??)

PD said...

sabase pahle to badhayi dunga tumhe, jo Hindi Blog ke dunia ke sitare bhi aaj-kal tumhare blog par aa rahe hain.. :) main "Udan Tashtari Ji" ke baare me baat kar raha hun..

ab dusari badhayi ek aur achchi kavita ke liye.. jo aaj ke sachchayi ke bahut karib hai..
tumhara post padhte samay mujhe bhi ek kavita yaad aa rahi hai..
wo yahan likh raha hun.. Ye Panjab ke ek kavi dwara likha hua hai.. Unka naam hai पाश.. unki ye kavita bahut hi jyada charchit rahi thi, aur aaj ke sandarbh me bhi ise communist se jora jata hai.. kayi log ise naxal vadion ka geet bhi kahte hain.. par phir bhi aaj ka yahi yathaarth bhi hai..

सबसे खतरनाक होता है सपनों का मर जाना

मेहनत की लूट सबसे खतरनाक नहीं होती
पुलिस की मार सबसे खतरनाक नहीं होती
गद्दारी, लोभ की मुट्ठी
सबसे खतरनाक नहीं होती

बैठे बिठाए पकड़े जाना बुरा तो है
सहमी सी चुप्पी में जकड़े जाना बुरा तो है
पर सबसे खतरनाक नहीं होती

सबसे खतरनाक होता है
मुर्दा शांति से भर जाना
ना होना तड़प का
सब कुछ सहन कर जाना
घर से निकलना काम पर
और काम से लौट कर घर आना
सबसे खतरनाक होता है
हमारे सपनों का मर जाना

-पाश

PYAASA SAJAL said...

aap sabo ka bahut shukriyaa...badi khushi huyi ki"udan tashtari" ji jaise log yahaan aaye......
thanks pushy.....finally tumhein english ke shabd mile comment maarne ke liye.........
behnaa ko bhi mera shukriyaa.aur surprised kyon......nahi ji
prashant bhaiyaa ke ashirvaad keliye unka bhi hardik dhanyavaad.aur unke dwaara share ki gayi kavita ke liye bhi

vandana said...

Hi Sajal Ji
Aaj bahut dino k baad main aapka blog dekh rahi hoon..
aapki kavita bahut achchi hai..
main bhi kuch likhna chahoongi yahan par,.. just have a look at it..
RAMZAAN and DIWALI.these r two festivals of hindu and muslims, everyone is aware of it. However if we have a close look then "RAM zaan" has a name of Hindu God "RAM" in its beginning and "diwALI" has name of muslim God..
its we humans who have created communal disharmony.. even festivals show cultural and religious combinations in perfect synchro... :)

PYAASA SAJAL said...

waah vandana...kya baat kahi hai.......(vaise ye maine pehle bhi suni thi)......khair main bhi is communalism ke khilaaf hi to bol raha hoon...aur ye accept kar raha hoon ki hum log hi iske liye responsible hai

kavya said...

bahut hi achchi lagi yeh kavita mujhe....infact jhakjhor diya chand lines ne...bahut feel kiya hai...har line dil me utarti si chali gayi...badhai!!

PYAASA SAJAL said...

bahut shukriya aapka........in baaton ko feel karne ki hi zaroorat hai..

k'sonal_theknowlegend said...

very truly expressed the scenario in some parts of our country...even i live in a muslim dominated area ..bt wat i think is ..it nt a fault on their part rather it is we who hav segregated them from the mainstream..nt at macroscopic level bt in our minds...we never can hav a lunch at some muslim dhaba/hotel..we never stay at some muslim sarai..
hey man watz this ..we r grown enough ..why nt shrug all these dogmas n customs..yaar it really makes me feel very sad

neways the idea of poem was better than the poem itself...thnx for such posts..

Pyaasa Sajal said...

hey thanks Sonal...I know am damn late :)